Character - Devil

age: 18
gender: male
sexy or not: sexy
Affiliation: Freelancers
Weapons and armor: Shiny black, curvy and flowy, asian like. stealthy and assassin like, kinda mongolionish. Two curved daggers on his sides, and one huge two hand sword across his back. no other weapons than that.

Personality: Silent, but he has a sense of humor. he walks rather slowly when alone but when attacked, omg its a totally different story. He is faster than lightning, and i mean LITERALLY.

Background: He is a chinese teenager who's name was David but he changed it to devil because its cooler. He trained to fight in assassin guilds and then left one day to adventure on his own.

Skills/Abilities/Magic: Extreme speed, fast movement, undodgable sorry. unless the rules say its possible. He has not many magical abilities except for summoning specific creatures which I will relate to later. He can also heal himself somewhat. His damage is very low but so fast and consistant that it might as well be a one hit KO.

Weaknesses: Extremely fast ranged attacks. wide diameter of damage attacks, like an explosion which shoots shrapnel everywhere. But he is extremely good at dodging, lets say, a trail of bullets. Yes he will dodge that with the coolest ninjaness you have EVER seen...or havent seen yet.

I'm David Lee, enjoy the greatness of Devil while you live, and have a nice day xD

Are you sure you're using this guideline?

It's not quite in depth enough.

To further graces comment, yes you do need to follow the template.

Also the idea when making a character is trying to create an alternate identity, not an "Undogeable display of Ninjaness". Go into detail, he likes humor? what kind, is it twisted humor, or an odd humor. His armor is "assasin like" people can interpret that a million different ways.

Just read the template and you'll understand. Just try some depth, resubmitt and we'll see what happens.